Dogs Are Better Than Cats
By: Katherine Granada
I believe that dogs are better than cats because they can do lots of important things like...
Helping the blind.
Dogs are important for the blind because they can guide them to places safely, if it is crowded or quiet. The guide dogs have good memory, and lots of intelligence.
Search and rescue
Dogs are very good at search and rescue! They can sniff someone's scent like someone’s breath or perfume to find someone and when they do, the dog will bark to alert the rescue team.
Loyal and Protective
Dogs are very loyal to their owners. When they see a stranger that they don’t know, they will start to bark at them and warn their owner. Puppies and dogs like to cuddle and go out on walks! If you could train your dog well, then maybe they can be talented and do lots of tricks.
Those are my reasons why I think dogs are better than cats. They have lots of jobs and talents they can do! Would you like to own a dog?
Kia ora Katherine, thank you for sharing your persuasive writing! I like how you used emotive language, facts and rhetorical questions to help persuade your reader. I would LOVE to have a dog. If I could get any breed of dog, I would get a Golden Retriever. What is your favourite kind of dog?
ReplyDeleteMy favourite dog is a Poodle because they are good family dogs. They are also fun, energetic, smart and easy to train.
ReplyDeleteTena koe Katherine. I really like your persuasive writing. I really like the emotive language you used. I also like how you used your punctuation. I also love how you elaborated you paragraphs. Do you own a dog? Keep up the splendid work!
ReplyDeleteYours truly~
Ruqayat
Thank you Ruqayat:) No, I dont have a dog but I wish I could have one.
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