I am a Year 6/7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Mīharo, amazing work Katherine! I really like how you used visuals to enhance your speech. One thing you could improve on next time would be to embed your webcam so we can see you as well! You spoke very clearly and expressively. Well done.
Hi Katherine. I loved your speech. You gave three very convincing arguments why uniforms are a great idea. As a mum I like uniforms because it stops kids having to worry about what they are going to wear. Your third reason is the best. No one can say bad things about what you are wearing because they are wearing the same. Well done Katherine. Bronca
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Mīharo, amazing work Katherine! I really like how you used visuals to enhance your speech. One thing you could improve on next time would be to embed your webcam so we can see you as well! You spoke very clearly and expressively. Well done.
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DeleteHi Katherine. I loved your speech. You gave three very convincing arguments why uniforms are a great idea. As a mum I like uniforms because it stops kids having to worry about what they are going to wear. Your third reason is the best. No one can say bad things about what you are wearing because they are wearing the same. Well done Katherine.
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Thank you Bronca!
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