I am a Year 6/7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I like how you were able to incorporate your book review here. It was great to see that you were able to share your opinion but also add your reasons. This way you could help readers try to understand your point of view and maybe want to read the story. Perhaps next time you could check your qr code to ensure it has the information you need. Thank you.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
I like how you were able to incorporate your book review here. It was great to see that you were able to share your opinion but also add your reasons. This way you could help readers try to understand your point of view and maybe want to read the story. Perhaps next time you could check your qr code to ensure it has the information you need. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you Whaea Lorraine, QR code generator notified me on December 3 and said that my free trial had ended. I'll try making another QR code.
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